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« Reply #30 on: August 24, 2017, 10:52:52 PM »

I choose to ignore you.

Cheers.

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You once sent me a PM?
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« Reply #31 on: August 25, 2017, 11:01:37 PM »

I choose to ignore you.

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You once sent me a PM?
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Well check it out CM ... I have actually made several replies or comments or sent praise to other Members songs or lyrics ok?

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« Reply #32 on: August 26, 2017, 03:25:21 AM »

I choose to ignore you.

Cheers.

Jackdaw1888

Ps...
You once sent me a PM?
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Well check it out CM ... I have actually made several replies or comments or sent praise to other Members songs or lyrics ok?

Jackdaw1888
Ok. I did.

I'm not writing much these days, music or reviews...I'm too distracted by my daughter's cancer treatment. Driving 400 miles round trip every couple weeks. Tiring emotionally and physically. I'll have to write a song about it some day.

I appreciate you've stepped up your reviews a bit. Overall, you definitely add flavor and activity to the forum.

Vicki

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« Reply #33 on: August 26, 2017, 08:31:17 AM »

I choose to ignore you.

Cheers.

Jackdaw1888

Ps...
You once sent me a PM?
Yes.
Well check it out CM ... I have actually made several replies or comments or sent praise to other Members songs or lyrics ok?

Jackdaw1888
Ok. I did.

I'm not writing much these days, music or reviews...I'm too distracted by my daughter's cancer treatment. Driving 400 miles round trip every couple weeks. Tiring emotionally and physically. I'll have to write a song about it some day.

I appreciate you've stepped up your reviews a bit. Overall, you definitely add flavor and activity to the forum.

Vicki

I have sent you a couple of PM's Vicki.
You will understand why when you read.
Kind Regards
Jackdaw
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« Reply #34 on: August 26, 2017, 04:59:02 PM »
To Vicki.
Many thanks for your compassion and understanding re my PM's to yourself.
Its a difficult time for me at the mo but you have gained my trust and my friendship.

Take care
Jackdaw 1888

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Never forget that being a Mum or Mom or a Mother is the hardest job in the World!!!
« Last Edit: August 26, 2017, 05:00:42 PM by Jackdaw »
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« Reply #35 on: August 26, 2017, 09:19:39 PM »
Thanks, Jackdaw!

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« Reply #36 on: August 26, 2017, 09:22:32 PM »
Thanks, Jackdaw!

YOU are most welcome Missy Vicki.
No need for your Thanks but cheers anyways

Jackdaw x x x

Ps ... I would be more than happy and willing to help you write the Song you said you may write one day.

I recentlly wrote the following for my Mum.

Jackdaw 1888 :-)
« Last Edit: August 26, 2017, 09:45:42 PM by Jackdaw »
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« Reply #37 on: August 26, 2017, 09:52:38 PM »
'ALZHEIMERS'

Dear Mum

Time has made us Strangers
But you still remain my Mum
I know you do not know me
But I am Carl your Son.

You gave me Life
And Loved me much
I miss your smile
And warmth
And touch.

A lways remember that I am here by your side

L eading you through darkness and fears you now hide

Z ealed by my love for you

H onoured to be your child

E very passing sun and moon

I dyllic memories run wild

M y care and thoughts are with you

E ach and every day

R est assured Dear Mum

S alvation's on its way.

Time has made us Strangers
But you still remain my Mum
I know you do not know me
But I am Carl your Son.

You gave me Life
And Loved me much
I miss your smile
And warmth
And touch.

To my dear Mum, Maggie xxx
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« Reply #38 on: August 26, 2017, 11:05:13 PM »
I like this, I like how jayleen can both be a person and a metaphor for being suckered in and broken by a beautiful person.. It's simple but it works coz it's relatable , could maybe be extended a bit? Well done!

Sent these lyrics to JAYLEEN STONEHOUSE
The JAYLEEN lyrics.

NOT the Alzheimer Ode to my Mum

Regards
Jackdaw 1888 :-)
« Last Edit: August 26, 2017, 11:22:33 PM by Jackdaw »
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« Reply #39 on: August 31, 2017, 06:14:23 PM »
Working upon a final verse for this at the mo.
It will be Jayleen's kind of epitaph.

Jackdaw1888 :-)
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« Reply #40 on: September 24, 2017, 10:34:54 PM »
Thanks, Jackdaw!

Dear Vicki.
I hope you and your daughter are well.
Cancer beat my elder Sister two days ago.
Take care and best wishes.
Jackdaw x x x
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« Reply #41 on: September 25, 2017, 01:35:57 AM »
 So sorry, Jackdaw! It seems more and more people I know are being diagnosed all the time. Is it just my age, or is the rate going up?

Vicki

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« Reply #42 on: September 30, 2017, 12:23:49 PM »
"So chique and debonair"

I don't know what these two words mean.  ;D

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« Reply #43 on: September 30, 2017, 01:39:28 PM »
"So chique and debonair"

I don't know what these two words mean.  ;D

Oh dear :-(

Maybe you should do some research :-)

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« Reply #44 on: September 30, 2017, 01:46:35 PM »
"So chique and debonair"

I don't know what these two words mean.  ;D

Oh dear :-(

Maybe you should do some research :-)

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Chic

adjective, chicer, chicest.
1.
attractive and fashionable; stylish:
a chic hat.
noun
2.
style and elegance, especially in dress:
Paris clothes have such chic.
3.
stylishness; modishness:
the chic of the firstnighters.
4.
casual and understated style, as in dress or décor, that expresses a specified trendy lifestyle or activity:
Black-rimmed glasses bring some geek chic to your outfit.

Debonair

adjective
1.
courteous, gracious, and having a sophisticated charm:
a debonair gentleman.
2.
jaunty; carefree; sprightly.


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