Hey Josemar,
Not sure why things have gone a bit silent on your thread here, though I always find it useful to give a bit of context and direction on the feedback you're looking for - otherwise it can be an intimidating task to undertake.
That said I appreciate the mix between humor and sadness in the lyrics, I can really put myself int he antagonist shoes right from the get-go, which makes some of the parts which seem humorous from an outside view hit home. In fact there's a third one; as looking at it from the antagonist's point of view could be quite creepy and scary. That's got to be some good stuff that you can look at it from at least three angles and get different feeling from it - very empathy-inducing and that conflict is powerful.
Only possible suggestion would be to give more of a hint at what is meant by
Wanna say sorry to your face
For my dumb mistakes that caused you pain
It's intriguing and I think it would be nice to give some clues (but not outright) at what happened, to give a bit more foundation for the listener/reader to let their imagination run with.
I would really like to hear this, the flow of lyrics as I'm reading them is very nice - and coupled with the great thoughtfulness of words could make for a really great track.
All the best,
Scott.
