[SilverBeat]

My July 2017 song is "You Make It Easy To Be Sweet"
https://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat/song/28413976-you-make-it-easy-to-be-sweet
 
Cheers,
Terry
 
 
I have completed every thing from start to finish.
 
You make it easy to be sweet

I wanna tell your wonderful
You mean the world to me
So incredibly beautiful
In every way I know and see
I think about you all the time
When ever I'm away
I need you like a poat needs a rhyme
Like a flower needs a summer day

Chorus

You make it easy to be sweet
So very easy to be sweet

I wanna tell you it's lavishing
All you give to me
So amazingly ravishing
In every way that one can be

Repeat Chorus

Yeah you make me wanna be a better man
Yeah in every way that I can
https://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat/song/28413976-you-make-it-easy-to-be-sweet

[diademgrove]

Hi Terry,

one verse and once chorus to say I love you. Nothing wrong with that. I presume you don't want any feedback as you haven't asked for any.

I've not listened to the song as you've posted this in the lyrics section.

I haven't checked but have you given any feedback on other people's lyrics/songs?

Keith

[Jackdaw]

Confusing Thread come Post come Messages etc etc.

Jackdaw1888

Ps...
As for the lyrics they need alot of work me thinks.
But a good start may I say.
As for its Title? ...
It needs to be changed! SOONEST :-)