Hello! I'm new here so this is my first post. I read the rules said that you can only post one song every 14 days. I'm guessing that applies to lyrics too?
English is not my first language, so the main reason I'll be posting lyrics is to identify if I'm not using the language properly. I'm the singer/songwriter of a band, so the music for this song already exists. But I wanted to make sure it doesn't have any stupid mistakes before we started recording :)
In this lifeless city
Everything’s quiet and calm.
But you’ve decided that
It’s me you want to find,
From the shadows I raise one eyebrow.
…Catch me if you can.
Don’t trust your senses,
They crave too much for me.
You’ll think you hear my voice,
Think you catch my scent,
Think you see my silhouette everywhere.
…No, I don’t think you can.
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Even if I let you trace me,
Even if I let you come near me,
Are you really sure you’ll tame me?
Please don’t fool yourself anymore.
From the top of this tower
I look down upon you.
I don’t need to hide,
I find amusing how
You think you’re on the right path but you’re lost.
…Catch me if you can.
After searching every street
You didn’t realize,
You’ve been trapped in this
City’s chaotic maze.
I’m starting to get bored of this game.
…I’m done waiting, babe.
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*GUITAR SOLO*
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