The Line

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digger72

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« Reply #15 on: August 24, 2017, 07:02:08 PM »
Hi PJ,

Liking this.
Getting plenty of Lennon too. Sort of "I Want You - She's So Heavy" with some more of Lennon's more introspective stuff thrown in. Then some great psychedelic guitar work.

Great tempo. Vocal works very well across it all.

Really well put together.

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Neil C

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« Reply #16 on: August 31, 2017, 08:25:18 AM »
John, really good songwriting here.
The soundscape suits the lyrics with those descending and menacing chords. Powerful ending.
My only feedback is on occasions your playing and singings slightly ahead of the drums.
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David Christy Jones

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« Reply #17 on: September 01, 2017, 01:29:24 AM »
Love it. Reminds me of something, perhaps The Beatles. Not quite sure at the moment....
The space is brilliant, and the way the music supports the lyrics (Which are great by the way).
Literally the only critique i'd have would be on some of the snare hits being very slightly out of time, but that is absolutely nit-picking.
Keep it up, I look forward to hearing more! :D
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