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Featherstone

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« Reply #15 on: August 19, 2017, 05:13:28 PM »

Hello

I enjoyed this song, I would bring the lead vocal levels up by 3dB, I would also add some more backing harmonies in Stereo panned 70%left and 70% right respectively.

Otherwise it's a good fun song.

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« Reply #16 on: August 20, 2017, 07:53:50 PM »
Ha, this is great! I really love the lyrics, wonderful rhymes but still sounding very natural.

Nice bouncy rhythm and a very polished mix. Good stuff!

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« Reply #17 on: August 21, 2017, 12:32:24 PM »
Love what you've done here - the laconic vocal against the bouncy backing works really well. I too was trying to put my finger on something around the grievances line which didn't quite sit right - and I think the others are spot on.
Very cool and different track!

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« Reply #18 on: August 21, 2017, 02:14:28 PM »
I agree with Neil C ,reminded me of Ian Dury. Your voice and accent is really suited to the song style.Nice harmonica aswell. Good work

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« Reply #19 on: August 24, 2017, 07:16:19 PM »
Hi Neil,

I listened to PJ's song before this - just a little different vibe. Lol.

Bright and breezy. Simple, but effective. Something I'd like to sing to one or two of the people I work with.
Liked the outro harmonica.

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« Reply #20 on: August 28, 2017, 03:52:25 PM »
Pompeyjazz put his finger right on it - Ian Dury would be proud of this. Loved the backing track and the playing is peerless. Confident vocals, great production and spot on vibe. Superb throughout.

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« Reply #21 on: August 30, 2017, 03:26:04 PM »


Kev, "cute number made everyone smile in the Jeep while stuck in a jam" And explaining to non English speaking :-)


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Neil

they do speak English but sometimes they can't catch every word of a song..so explained a bit of it here and there...
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