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Read August 12, 2017, 05:56:00 PM #15
Darren1664

Re: The beauty of a simple mind (Acoustic, rough but finished)

Thanks The Butcher and Shadowfax! Glad to hear you enjoyed it and liked the lyrics  Smiley thanks for taking the time to listen and review - much appreciated. Darren
 
Read August 13, 2017, 01:29:36 AM #16
Paulski

Re: The beauty of a simple mind (Acoustic, rough but finished)

Hi Darren

Good song! I especially liked the lyrics, the vocals (and the length  Grin)
It has an innocence to it that would be ruined by a bigger production IMHO.
However I think the current presentation could be cleaned up a bit to make it really shine.

Paul
 
Read Yesterday at 08:24:57 AM #17
Rightly

Re: The beauty of a simple mind (Acoustic, rough but finished)

this is a little gem of a song.
"Brighter than my wisdom"

reminds me of Bonnie Prince Billy, on a good day.

lovely chorus

well done
 
Read Yesterday at 09:23:24 AM #18
PaulAds

Re: The beauty of a simple mind (Acoustic, rough but finished)

Very cool  Cool

This is great...I really loved the lyrics and the sentiment behind them.

I enjoyed it very much just as it is.

I looked through the previous comments before I wrote this to see if I'd be repeating what had gone before...

The S hit the nail on the head...I thought the guitar intro was way too good to not make much more use of.

Could grow into a really great song with a little work, I think.

Great writing!


heart of stone, feet of clay, knob of butter
 
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