[Mverboekend]

Hi Paul,

Very surprising song! It's weird but absolutely great The dynamic contrast is fun, although this does make it a bit less fluent as one song. Love the clever lyrics as well.

Thanks for brightening up my day

[Paulski]

@Neil C - thanks Neil - yeah the synth is a like/hate kinda thing. Guitar comment means a lot coming from you - cheers 

@exfairy - cheers - very kind of you 

@Darren1664 - thanks Darren - think you're right about sth out of time - maybe it's my new bongos - I'll check that 

@digger72 - thanks digger - I expect not too many ppl listen to this type of thing on a regular basis (I don't ) Appreicate that you found it fun though 

@Mverboekend - thanks for that - weird fun is what I'm all about at times 

Thanks all for listening and commenting 

[jamesh]

Hi Paul

Love the piano intro and the melody. I was expecting the song to continue in that vein, but then the drums unexpectedly came in. Im not sure Im a fan of the drums/bass combo, but I it certainly added some light/shade and some fun.

I dont think Ive ever heard anyone refer to geometric shapes, but lyrics are inspired and the idea totally works. As previously commented, its a show tune, and a really good one!

James

[Summerblue]

Clever, funny, somewhat intelligent.
Just please totally drop that b******t over-produced, under-produced drum backing. It's terrible. I get the idea of 'contrast', but not like this. Use a groove, or better still, don't, use a real drummer, but even that isn't necessary. A tambourine, even a simple loop from Stylus RMX or something, would be ten times better.

[Paulski]

Sorry for the late bump

@jamesh - never set out to write show-tunes but I'm glad they fit some genre!  Thanks for the kind remarks.

@Summerblue - Thanks for commenting. Am I to understand you don't like the drums? 

[adamfarr]

Just to let you know I've listened (quite a few times now!) Such a fun, generation-crossing track. Love what you did here!

[Oldbutyet]

Yeah another great musical number Paul thats for sure, find yourself a musical society group and make it happen, you got all the songs waiting in line to be heard and send us a few free tickets okay mate.

Oh and some airlines tickets as well and a ticket for a very large cargo, you're going to need a limousine      

[Paulski]

Adam and Pat - thanks so much for the kind remarks.
Yeah Pat we're gonna need some cold Coors in the limo too 

[redrhodie]

Now that is ready for Broadway! Very theatrical. It's like Cole Porter goes to the disco. Very fun.

[Morefrog Jones]

Broadway meets Sesame Street.
Theatrical and clever.
Way out of my taste range but you cannot fail to spot the musical ability involved in its creation.

[Paulski]

redrhodie and morefrog

Thanks guys - very kind of you - see ya on broadway