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NEW DEMO "INVINCIBLE" LOVE TO HEAR YOUR VIEWS

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Petebrennan

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« Reply #15 on: August 24, 2017, 01:04:44 PM »
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« Reply #16 on: August 24, 2017, 01:18:59 PM »
Peter,

No worries.
Lyric video up on youtube @petebrennanmusic
Background is i wrote the song as a fuck you to everybody who ever told me I can't sing or write or play or had no talent and dedicated to anyone who received similar comments


Who says you cant sing, Boll*cks, great sound, vocal sound good.

OK, the production isnt great, but thats easy to sort, I notice you in Bodmin, Me and Mikey in Plymouth.

If you send me the stems I can get that sounding really punchy.

Good song, yeh, I would trim a minute off, Nice work.



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« Reply #17 on: August 24, 2017, 04:43:05 PM »
Thanks man. Yeah going into studio soon to trim it and fiddle the mix a bit.
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« Reply #18 on: August 24, 2017, 06:59:24 PM »
Sorry wrong thread!

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« Reply #19 on: August 24, 2017, 07:35:36 PM »
Okay???

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« Reply #20 on: August 24, 2017, 11:13:53 PM »
Hey Pete, sounds like you've really moved this forwards from the version you posted a couple of months back.  Sounds like the chorus has a lot more welly now and I still dig the stuff I did last time (that vibrating string in the second round of each verse).  As others have said, still room for a little trimming of repeats to make it a little shorter (leave 'em wanting more...) but you have a cracking power track on your hands now.  Nice one.
It's all too beautiful.

Petebrennan

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« Reply #21 on: August 24, 2017, 11:49:43 PM »
Thanks man

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« Reply #22 on: August 27, 2017, 08:57:49 PM »
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« Reply #23 on: August 30, 2017, 01:04:49 PM »
Good song ,very visual lyrics of rising up against the odds.Nice beat and chord progression that reminds me of Ryan Tedder which ain't easy to achieve

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« Reply #24 on: August 30, 2017, 04:25:30 PM »
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the track