When this Bottle lets go of my Hand

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« Reply #15 on: August 01, 2017, 11:44:55 PM »
What they all said! Really good stuff. Fantastic lyrics, masterfully presented. 
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« Reply #16 on: August 02, 2017, 10:00:29 AM »
Hi Paul,

Great title, great song, great performance and lovely production. So classy throughout. I liked some of the unexpected chord changes. Reminded me of classic George Jones. There isn't anything I can suggest to improve it - it's all there already. So good to hear you're still writing and recording to this standard.



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« Reply #17 on: August 03, 2017, 04:36:10 PM »
Time to show some appreciation of you kind folks  ;D

@delb0y - thanks Derek - that song is a gold standard - so I'm humbled to be used in the same sentence!  ;D

@Binladeda - cheers bin - esp appreciate the comment on the low vocals ;D

@Viscount - ha I never get sick of a "says on the can" comment. glad it suits the genre - whatever that is..  ;D thanks for listening and commenting.

@Yodasdad - appreciate the kind words - piano and all  ;D Thank you

@Vintage54 - cheers my man Vintage - maybe next time I'll go outlaw, maybe not  ;D Glad you heard something worthwhile here.  ;D

@Royston - thanks Royston - and thanks for the comment on SC too  ;D

@shadowfax - cheers Kevin - give my regards to broadway  ;D

@Oldbutyet Thanks Pat - yeah old-school country brings back memories for me too. Glad you liked this.  ;D

@Neil C - cheers Neil - nope not autobiographical thankfully - thanks for the comments on SC too.

@Cazrolina - thank you - you are too kind!

@montydog - hey Alan welcome back  ;D Now George Jones - there was a country singer IMHO. Thanks for that comparison - gone straight to me head.  ;D ;D

Thanks again everyone - hope I didn't miss you  ;D


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« Reply #18 on: August 04, 2017, 07:19:25 AM »
Good stuff. Aye, she's a cold mistress, I hope the song isn't autobiographical.

I like a walz, the voice sounds very country though.

Thanks for posting.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

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« Reply #19 on: August 05, 2017, 08:07:22 AM »
Hi Paul, I'd like to say that this is up to your usual standards of writing, playing , singing and production, but I can't. I think this is exceptional, it's one of the very best pieces I've heard on this site. Very melodic, the lyrics are spot on and the playing and singing are great. Well done!


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« Reply #20 on: August 06, 2017, 02:15:32 PM »
Excellent stuff again from you Paul!

I love how you take on characters so well. You bring songs to life in your delivery. The music and lyrics are always on point. Whenever I see a post in the lyrics board from you I'm always thinking 'This will be interesting...' and you never disappoint! Cleverly written and performed.

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« Reply #21 on: August 06, 2017, 07:18:53 PM »
I'm sorry Paulski but I have nothing whatsoever to offer in terms of constructive criticism, all I can do is bow my head in respect and state that this is quality in every aspect and detail.
Heck, I don't even have the slightest nit on the production!  ;D
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« Reply #22 on: August 09, 2017, 05:49:30 PM »
@Rightly - cheers - yeah a cold mistress indeed. Not autobiographical !

@Jamie - oh you set me up - thought you were gonna say.. thankfully you didn't! Appreciate the kind words esp coming from a man with your chops.

@Darren1664 - thanks Darren - glad you thought I didn't let the lyric down - always a challenge as you probably know.

@Jambrains - wow - JB another review like that and I'm going to get a big head. It already barely gets into a 7 3/4 hat Thank you kind sir!


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« Reply #23 on: August 12, 2017, 11:39:41 AM »
Hi Paul,

This is you in a bottle - "Paulski's Magic Brew #1"

Great backing vocals.

Always a quality listen - the only country star I listen to!