Hello Everyone again and ty for your time and support; it means a lot to me;
@MverboenkI actually like the long outro as it is (like slowly waking up Wink), but I do think the first verse is a bit too long before you go to the chorus...
Thanks for sharing!!
TY and your welcome; still working on some arrangement stuff.
@PaulskiHappy to see sth new from you!
Lovely song. I always love it when there is a stop, pause in a song to escape from the relentless tick track we get imprisoned by at times. Well, I do anyway
yes; i tried with dynamics; i ike it too.
I thought the kick was a little aggressive before the raunchy part comes in and the snare a little weak in the second half. All down to taste I know but as skub says, doesn't detract from the quality of the songwriting here Grin
still working on the mix. Tx a lot P.
@CramerI like the mellow stuff Butch...not as much as some of your stuff but it's nice all the same. Vocal is always good...lyrics and delivery good.
thank you
The two parts together don't work for me as well as they could do...i'm wondering about the transition between parts.
it s a challenge
I hate to criticise when someone is trying to experiment with stuff...it's more than I ever do!
don t worry; i criticise when artists repeat stuff
Just wonder if the song could bear more thinking about in terms of knitting it all together as a satisfying whole. Nothing wrong with the song as such just I didn't get the flow too well but that may be just me
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Yes; there will be a live drum session tonight; i m curious...
Ty
@David ChristyKeep it up, look forward to hearing more! Cheesy
thank you. I have about 40 songs on SoundCloud; feel free to listen
@PaulAdsI thought this one was great
Daft as it might sound, but I think you could have had two great songs here instead of just one
no; i get what you say, but....no
and I hope that doesn't come across negatively at all...because it think it's a really excellent song.
nono. all good. tx a lot my friend.
@shadowfaxA good song..works for me mate, the only crit i have is that the distorted guitar is a bit too, sort of.. crackly..but no biggie Smiley Smiley
ty; we will try different guitar amps.
@YodasdadI enjoyed this, there was an unpredictability and authenticity about it that I liked.
GREAT !
Production is a tricky thing for sure. I wouldn't really notice an issue here but I can hear that it doesn't quite have that full, phat sound that you seemed to be after.
yes
As for the song itself though, nice work. There was a catchiness to it without it being too pop and losing its edge, which I suspect wouldn't be what you'd want.
@JoeAntaineNice vocal, could do with a little more polish on the production.
agree; ty
@Morefrog JonesSlow burner that built up some momentum as it went on - Changes in pace seemed quite stark at times which left you wondering where is was going to end up - Great effort
thank you; yes; i wanted to make a song thats everything but not boring
@montydogthank you too.
The musical highlight of my day so far.
oh; what a great compliment
Okay; so far so good; the whole thing is not finished and i ll be posting an update in the next week.
Thank you all for your attention.
B.
