The Boy Who Never Sleeps (First Post)

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Neil C

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« Reply #15 on: August 04, 2017, 02:54:41 PM »
Hi and welcome,
Nice track, resonator sounds great and you've a good melody there.
I like your voice, you seem to have a few tones in there, a more powerful in the lower register and then a higher one which sounds more reserved. And if I'm being picky I'd encourage you to be more confident on those too. The long backing harmonies work really well.
Going to have another listen.
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Neil 
 
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« Reply #16 on: August 06, 2017, 06:27:59 PM »
Intro sets a great mood and the rest delivers. Very good vocals and arrangement add dynamics so interest is kept throughout. My only complaint would be the ambience (esp on the guitar). Is is a two-edged sword, on one hand it words great to create the mood but on the other hand it almost "takes over" the whole song if that made any sense? Anyway, just my personal prefs of course, well done and welcome here.

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« Reply #17 on: August 07, 2017, 09:31:39 AM »
I don't know much about this genre but I liked what I heard.

Nice strong vocal too.

I look forward to hearing more from you.

Yodasdad