Hi,
This one was created in a different way to usual.
https://soundcloud.com/my-idiom/breathless-and-confused-m-blair-2017I was asked to write a short exerpt of music for the teen market for a project that someone is working on. What I created was the chorus to this track, fully finished and produced but only a chorus existed. I then worked backwards and filled the rest of the song in around it.
It was interesting to work this way but when the rest of the song took shape, I nearly decided to replace the original chorus with something completely different.
Anyway, over to you, I 'd love to hear your feedback, good or bad.
Thanks
Yodasdad
Breathless and Confused - © M Blair 2017
V1
Breathless
As I watch her pass I’m breathless
When she looks at me
I’m sure I start to fall apart
V2
Senseless
Someone bring me to my senses
She’s like a drug to me
I’ve been hooked right from the start
Pre chorus
How can i ignore those perfect lips
When she pouts them out, without a doubt they’re calling out to me.
Chorus
The girls got moves
She’s harder to read than a shakespeare sonnet
She’ll smile at you
then she’ll Tear out your heart and just stamp right on it
Although her eyes seem lonely
she’s got a smile that says phone me
she’ll leave you breathless and confused
V3
Reckless
She’s got right under my defences
Like a tomahawk
leaving me nowhere to hide
V4
Restless
She’s on my mind all day it’s endless
hopeless fantasies
of me there by her side
Pre chorus
I dream about the way she’d feel to kiss
If she’d only stop and notice how I’m hopeless to resist.
Mid 8
She’s not the only girl to choose from
but she’s the only one that moves me in this way
I think i’m just about to lose it
And she doesn’t even know my name