Won't Be Your Tool

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s.l.wolf

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« Reply #15 on: July 10, 2017, 11:10:55 PM »
Sounds great. The lyrics are pretty amazing.  :D
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« Reply #16 on: July 12, 2017, 07:34:43 PM »
Hi mate

First off great lyrics. I loved it when the track picked up the chorus, it was in great contrast to the verses. You have a lovely voice and some real nice guitars going on there. Nice tune!!

Cheers buddy

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« Reply #17 on: July 15, 2017, 06:57:59 PM »
Your stuff is always excellent my friend..this is no exception, love the guitar playing..just thought you didn't use the hook enough or make enough of it...

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« Reply #18 on: July 15, 2017, 09:17:59 PM »
Sounds great. The lyrics are pretty amazing.  :D

Thanks you so much!!

Hi mate

First off great lyrics. I loved it when the track picked up the chorus, it was in great contrast to the verses. You have a lovely voice and some real nice guitars going on there. Nice tune!!

Cheers buddy

Darren
 

Thank you Darin....always appreciated!



Your stuff is always excellent my friend..this is no exception, love the guitar playing..just thought you didn't use the hook enough or make enough of it...

Best, kevin

And it's a;ways a pleasure, Shadow! Thanks.........And here, I thought I was over using the Hook line!


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« Reply #19 on: July 17, 2017, 01:44:38 AM »
thought the vocals were very nice,

the guitar chords fitted very nicely and was very easy to listen to
The production very clean also so no negatives from me
cheers
Lilly

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« Reply #20 on: July 19, 2017, 07:40:37 AM »
thought the vocals were very nice,

the guitar chords fitted very nicely and was very easy to listen to
The production very clean also so no negatives from me
cheers
Lilly

Thanks lillypilly........glad you like it!

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« Reply #21 on: July 19, 2017, 10:08:22 PM »
Hi Tom. I've listened to this song several times and then realised that I hadn't reviewed it. I love the melody and your surround sound acoustic.  The vocals are yearning, just fit in with the song so well. The evil laughter is clever. Excellent stuff  :)

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« Reply #22 on: July 21, 2017, 01:24:23 PM »
Great song concept and the puppet images work really well. There's something psychadelic about those swirling guitars. The picking ending is great too - I wondered if it could be used elsewhere too for a bit of contrast? But at the end of the day it's a good song with good ingredients put together mightily well.

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« Reply #23 on: July 21, 2017, 10:22:36 PM »
Brilliant. This is indeed a VERY good song.
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« Reply #24 on: July 22, 2017, 08:40:59 PM »
Hey Tom.

I have listened to this several times but somehow omitted to leave a review!
I love the timeless folky feel, it's a lovely strong song well played and sung.

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« Reply #25 on: August 02, 2017, 11:41:54 AM »
Hi Tom,

In my opinion you are one of the most talented musicians on this forum and I've loved everything you have posted on here. This is another classy piece of work. I like the instrumental palette you've used - the guitars sound great and your vocal has real guts to it. I don't think its the best thing you've posted but it's still outstandingly good.

M

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« Reply #26 on: August 04, 2017, 03:03:50 PM »
tom,
apologies for being late, really great tune and performance. And it really drives along when you get to the chorus, who needs drums and bass eh?
 :) :)
Neil
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« Reply #27 on: August 05, 2017, 08:46:55 AM »
Hi Tom. I've listened to this song several times and then realised that I hadn't reviewed it. I love the melody and your surround sound acoustic.  The vocals are yearning, just fit in with the song so well. The evil laughter is clever. Excellent stuff  :)

Thank you, very much! 8)

Great song concept and the puppet images work really well. There's something psychadelic about those swirling guitars. The picking ending is great too - I wondered if it could be used elsewhere too for a bit of contrast? But at the end of the day it's a good song with good ingredients put together mightily well.

Thanks Adam....always appreciate your comments!  ;D

Brilliant. This is indeed a VERY good song.

And thank you, as well!  ;D

Hey Tom.

I have listened to this several times but somehow omitted to leave a review!
I love the timeless folky feel, it's a lovely strong song well played and sung.

Thanks a lot skub ;D

Hi Tom,

In my opinion you are one of the most talented musicians on this forum and I've loved everything you have posted on here. This is another classy piece of work. I like the instrumental palette you've used - the guitars sound great and your vocal has real guts to it. I don't think its the best thing you've posted but it's still outstandingly good.

M

Thanks montydog.........I appreciate your generous comments.....it's all a working guy gets 8)
Thanks, again!!

tom,
apologies for being late, really great tune and performance. And it really drives along when you get to the chorus, who needs drums and bass eh?
 :) :)
Neil

Hi Neil.......thanks for stopping by. The song was my usual rush job, in order to get it into a little comp, elsewhere. I'm still wanting to hold you to your earlier offer with that Bass guitar of yours  8)
thanks, again, Neil.

And thanks to all who have listened!
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"I know the truth, by my struggle against it"
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