[Jamie]

Hi Adam, haven't heard anything from you recently but I'd say there's a big jump in performance on all areas of your performance, production and writing. Not a style of song I would listen to  but I can hear what you were after, well done!
Cheers
Jamie

[Yodasdad]

Very smart lyrics.

I don't think I've used that many words in all of my songs combined!

I particularly liked the all inclusive/pay as you go line.

Musically it works just fine. it jumps about a bit chord wise more than i like but...that's just a preference thing so nowt to worry about there.

Just one little thing, and again this could just be my personal taste. I couldn't help thinking that an extra white, instead the Bi Bi of bikini was what I wanted to hear.

Good writing though, sounds like you had fun with this one.

Yodasdad

[mickyplankton]

Utterly charming song. First 30 seconds I wasn't sure but then it all clicked into place. The lyrics and chorus are brilliant very singalong. Another summer scorcher.