Okay guys not to sure about the intro im just going with the flow here, but after Paul piece we need Jenna to come in with something like "hey boys" then the music goes low high heels sound walking across a dance floor and then she hit us with her chorus, maybe.
I don't need you any more
To have a good time
I'm still dancing every night
With every man I can find.
Just thoughts but i think we need a kick ass moment in the song 
The song length currently sits at a trimmed 3.35,Pat. If we wish to add any new parts,then existing sections will need to be culled to make room. There are always going to be ideas.
This is part of the difficulty with songs,the process could in theory run forever and yield many slightly different versions of the same song,but sooner,rather than later an agreed on decision will need to be made.
See what folk think. 
Edit....just to mention also there are over 30 tracks in the song so far,so it'll be a mammoth mixing job when it comes to the final cut.
Hey Davy
Sorry i didn't get back to you earlier im on holidays at the moment, no work in the morning so just having a relaxing night, chilling out with a few beers and yes a glass of my favoured, no cocktails eh., anyway, as one songwriter to another we are not going to fall out over lyrics or whatever im just going to go with the flow again, take it or leave it that's just the way i am, okay first.
"The song length currently sits at a trimmed 3.35,Pat. If we wish to add any new parts,then existing sections will need to be culled to make room. There are always going to be ideas"
I'm not talking about adding im talking about including, okay second part.
"This is part of the difficulty with songs,the process could in theory run forever and yield many slightly different versions of the same song,but sooner,rather than later an agreed on decision will need to be made"
I been writing lyrics and co writing songs for a long time i could tell you more but this is a public forum, now to your last bit.
"Edit....just to mention also there are over 30 tracks in the song so far,so it'll be a mammoth mixing job when it comes to the final cut"
Believe me i well believe that. and most of those 30 tracks was because of rewriting lyrics in other words rewriting a song, you three guys has got a track of flow now just edit the first post of lyrics and if you all want to edit time, just leave me out, im on holidays.
But one thing i will say (going with the flow again) is that no one can rewrite great imagery of lyrics that was first posted on this thread, as i said just my thoughts on this but hey y'all, does this mean i don't get my own limousine
Just my thoughts Davy hope you understand Mate, as i said just chilling it out on holidays on a one of late night
