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zeb wardon

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« on: June 24, 2017, 11:10:52 PM »
Hey guys just completed a new track.. please check it out :)
https://soundcloud.com/zeb_wardon92/in-your-favor

Some are born above the stars
Some are born below the stars
Whatever the case may be
Ill be up to me
Its so simple behind dim sights
Never give up without a fight
Until the final flight
Until the final flight


And ill bet ill work out
In your favor
And I hope you remember
To love and savor
Every single moment
Every living moment
Try and try

Now theres a new problem
With an old solution
Whatever the task at hand
You gotta take the stand
A choir outside your front door
Waiting for to step and soar
For one time
For one final time

And ill bet ill work out
In your favor
And I hope you remember
To love and savor
Every single moment
Every living moment
Try and try

Never in a million years thought never to feel this sorrow
Never in a thousand years would I ever think this through
Never in a hundred years would the past have the final say
Never in a foundry of sadness would despair rule another day
yeah  

And ill bet ill work out
In your favor
And I hope you remember
To love and savor
Every single moment
Every living moment
Try and try

« Last Edit: June 24, 2017, 11:25:55 PM by zeb wardon »

pompeyjazz

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« Reply #1 on: June 24, 2017, 11:21:55 PM »
Hi Zeb, I thought you had a really good vibe here.  Loved the way the chorus kicked in. Maybe a bit of mixing work to do but otherwise excellent  :)

zeb wardon

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« Reply #2 on: June 24, 2017, 11:27:24 PM »
Hi Zeb, I thought you had a really good vibe here.  Loved the way the chorus kicked in. Maybe a bit of mixing work to do but otherwise excellent  :)


Thank You sir
Yea im still new to mixing ;D

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PaulyX

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« Reply #4 on: June 25, 2017, 12:16:40 PM »
Hey Zeb,
Like your last one this is genre-defying and interesting... you don't sound boxed in by convention at all.  It's atmospheric and there's a lot of character in your voice, and you create a lot of dynamic contrast between the verse and chorus.  Maybe the chorus vocal melody could have more of a hook if you really want it to fly there, but with a bit more polishing I think you've got a really solid track here.
By the way, jump in and review some more other members' songs - I'm sure you'll get more substantial feedback too if you do that.
Cheers
Pauly
It's all too beautiful.

Gill

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« Reply #5 on: June 25, 2017, 03:47:03 PM »
Nice  song. The meaning of the song and vibes do eachother well  ;)