Pier to Pier Feedback (collab Paulyx and Digger)...summer comp.

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CaliaMoko

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« Reply #15 on: July 02, 2017, 02:17:29 PM »
Thanks for the comments Vicky - you and a few others have commented you can't understand the vernacular British lyrics, so here are some footnotes!  I'm not too sure what's British and what isn't, but anyway....

Thanks, Pauly. That helped a lot. I had since worked out the "bunked from school" line, as I saw it another place later and realized from the context what it had to be. And "Vespas" came back to me overnight; I apparently did know that one at one time. The rest, though, I would probably never have worked out on my own.

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« Reply #16 on: July 02, 2017, 03:59:48 PM »
These lyrics are a work of art.

It's a real slice of English seaside life (Brighton, specifically here, maybe - but applicable to much of this spectered isle :P)

Great backing and production and a very enjoyable listen all round.

I've tried fitting lyrics to order and I find it really difficult to do...you've done a fantastic job here.

I take my "kiss me quick" hat off to you all  :)
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« Reply #17 on: July 07, 2017, 09:39:02 AM »

 Thanks guys,

 Hope Pauls' explanation helped with the lyrics.
 Yeah....the drums and bass could come up a bit,
 But a small detail ;D  I'm really pleased with what
 we produced in such a short time, and it's still being
 worked on.  So any advice/crits/comments most welcome.

 Thanks again for all your kind words folks

 
Nowt as queer as folk...........my gran

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« Reply #18 on: July 07, 2017, 09:50:27 PM »
Hi guys, a really good collaboration. I got a Bowie vibe to it, mainly from the vocal tone and the melody. Nice groove going on. Lyrics worked well and the instrumentation sounded good.
Good stuff guys!
Cheers
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« Reply #19 on: July 11, 2017, 07:04:01 AM »
Awesome guys....this is hitting all 12 cylinders!! Like a super machine.......this is proving to be a fantastic chemistry....great collar. Original!!! Focused!!!!   Inspired!!!!
Me thinks this is the finest summer song I've heard.......dam good, fellas!
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« Reply #20 on: July 11, 2017, 05:42:40 PM »
Great Britpop tune with an irresistible vibe. Good melodies...especially at verse ends, the ascending bits...magic! Cool little bridge bit...not really a bridge at all...the 'summer's got the best tunes' bit.

Brilliantly evocative lyric....yeah we used to go down to Brighton to drink a few beers somewhere and hit the amusement arcades. In fact I spent many times there...my gran lived in Hove. Captures that seedy fairground/seaside feel so well.

Love the song...another one goes on my shortlist. Going to be difficult to pick top three!

Great collab guys.
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« Reply #21 on: July 13, 2017, 07:57:47 PM »
I thought I had commented here but obviously not. This is a great track, really great! Lyrics, music, vocals all do it for me. Well done!!

Thanks for sharing :)

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« Reply #22 on: July 14, 2017, 08:25:28 AM »
Hi,

I've never actually been to Brighton but this songs got me fancying a visit.

The clever lyrics paint a vibrant picture.

Considering this is a remote collaboration, it's come together remarkably well, you can't even see the joins or nuffin ☺️

Well done guys, great summer choon.

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« Reply #23 on: July 14, 2017, 09:05:42 AM »
You guys really came together to create one fantastic track :) Your usual fantastic backing track Bin :)
Even though I'm not a Brit, I can totally appreciate the 'clever, witty and evocative' lyrics, and the great job of delivering them vocally :) And of course the icing on the top, is digger's mixing magic :)
Kudos to you all and good luck :)

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« Reply #24 on: July 22, 2017, 12:24:44 AM »
Wicked collaboration. Cool and quirky, much like Brighton. Excellent production, tons of fun and paints a fabulous picture of my favourite seaside haunt. Loved it. 
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