Yes, a great performance to a very complex and well written song.
There were moments I thought it could be tighter but given the short rehearsal time I think you did exceptional. I like how the bassist went up to the other guitarist and was like 'Hey bro, see ya bro' and went back to his spot
and you look cool there mate!! You make me miss the band days - so long ago now!! (I used to play bass in a cover band, although we did write some originals)
Great stuff!! Thanks mate - btw, what is it you are not happy with?