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Read June 19, 2017, 07:41:21 AM #0
jonlint

New Rock Song Idea

Hi all,

Came up with this song idea and would appreciate feedback before I continue and write lyrics.

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/song-idea-80
 
Read June 19, 2017, 08:15:55 PM #1
Martinswede

Re: New Rock Song Idea

Hi!

I like the dry and crunchy guitar sound!
I see no reason to doubt that this could turn into a nice song. There is something melodic in the structure that makes it catchy.

I have no idea how to write lyrics to riffs neither do I know the opposite. Not a clue how to make a rock song rock. I blame music class at school. It's easiest that way.

Have you figured out a theme for the song or a title?

I hope it will be a joyful writing process!

Martin
 
Read June 23, 2017, 06:35:50 AM #2
jonlint

Re: New Rock Song Idea

Hi there,

Thanks for the feedback.  Have some initial ideas for lyrics - recorded them quickly.  Not my best performance and still not 100% happy.  Feedback welcome:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/fearless-unafraid-v01

FEARLESS UNAFRAID
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)
A leap of faith I take
It’s too late
To procrastinate
Dreams and fears are packed
Wheels hit tarmac
There’s no going back

One foot, in front of the other
There’s a whole world to discover

Future’s not certain for me
But I move on
Fearless unfraid
Master of my destiny
So I move on
Fearless unfraid

I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid
I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid
I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid
I’m movin’ on….fearless….un…afraid

Like Doctor Livingstone
I face the unknown
Leave the comfort zone
Courage that cannot fade
I’m not afraid
Of the choice I made

One foot, infront of the other
There’s a whole world to discover

Future’s not certain for me
But I move on
Fearless unfraid
Master of my destiny
So I move on
Fearless unfraid

I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid
I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid
I’m movin’ on, fearless unfraid
I’m movin’ on….fearless….un…afraid
 
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