What If Tomorrow - Adult Contemporary / Pop

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Summerblue

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« on: June 12, 2017, 11:55:10 AM »
Hello!

I recently finished this song and would be happy to hear your comments:



Thanks for listening,
Tom

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« Reply #1 on: June 12, 2017, 04:07:51 PM »
Hello and welcome! The verses are good and so is the chorus though it sounds a 'bit boy-bandish in the 00's in the chorus? In a good way. Great song altogether though!  ;)

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« Reply #2 on: June 13, 2017, 09:22:34 PM »
Hi Tom, welcome.
Your track sounds very contemporary to me.  Good voice with slick production.  I like the way it doesn't mess about at the end.
I reckon you could add more into the chorus (a few more layers of tracks) to give them a bigger lift and distinguish them from the verses a little more... some more dynamics would help this fly I felt.
Can you post the lyrics here?
Good luck with the track,
Pauly
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« Reply #3 on: June 13, 2017, 09:41:11 PM »
Hi

Nice track with good quality vocals,

Productions great too, Your vocal would sit great with a drum and bass production and heavy bass.

I love it, Screaming for a DnB remix to go with your original.

Great work,
Andy

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« Reply #4 on: June 28, 2017, 01:23:52 PM »
Hi everyone!

Thanks for your comments so far!

Best, Tom