Hello Pete, I enjoyed your song. Your vocal delivery sounds great in it - you have a good vibrato in your voice for this kind of track. The bit where the fuzzy guitars kick in at 1:14 is cool, the chorus has attitude, and I also liked the way you bring in what sounds like a reverbed single string of an acoustic (?) played fast under the second half of each verse - subtle but it helps the track build very nicely. Suggestions for improvement if any from me would be put your voice a bit higher in the mix during the choruses (it gets a bit lost) and try and shave a minute off it if you can since it's a bit long and felt slightly repetitive by the end - maybe the later verses and the middle 8 could be half the length without sacrificing the nice change in dynamics you have between them? Thanks for sharing this.
