Hi Lillypilly. I like your verses, but the last two lines of the chorus aren't doing it for me. I'm not clear on what you're communicating through them. The third line "why can't we all just get along," is a little too cliche for my taste, and the last line sounds disconnected from the feel of the verse lyrics. Is it the earth that's weary, or is it you that's weary? I would pick one of the two and stick with it to keep the message consistent throughout. Otherwise, it's a little confusing.
