Just finished a rough recording of this after writing the lyric and posting it in the lyrics section.
https://www.reverbnation.com/htmworksinprogress
Yesterday When You Still Loved Me.
If I hide inside a church, will it wash away my sin.
Can God show me a way that I can feel alright again.
Sprinkle me with holy water. Cleanse My soul I pray.
But never again will I feel as clean as I felt yesterday.
Yesterday when you still loved me, not so long before.
I wish somehow I could return to yesterday once more.
Looking for my will to live since you walked out that door.
I just want to go back and be the way we were before.
Take me to the ocean blue to wash away my pain.
Find a storm where I can stand beneath the cleansing rain.
Point me toward a waterfall. I’ll stand beneath the spray.
But never again will I feel as clean as I felt yesterday.
Yesterday when you still loved me, not so long before.
I wish somehow I could return to yesterday once more.
Looking for my will to live since you walked out that door.
Why can’t we go back and be the way we were before?
I never felt such guilt before. I never dreamed I could.
Cause once my life was like a script straight out of hollywood.
But then I ruined everything, and guilt’s the price I’ll pay.
And never again will I feel as clean as I felt yesterday.
As I felt yesterday.
Okay Verlon im going with imagery here so will reply verse at a time.
Before the first verse comes, in imagery im sitting in the back seat of some preacher house listening to the same old same old, then i hear your first verse of song, woke me up has me interested make me thinks listeners around are singing are singing.
Theres no point in talking lyrics here you thought them out well, before second verse you need a gap my friend.
Will post more on this
You're coming in to early with the chorus, follow the first verse with the second verse but just before, let us drift with the melody, that way then we're with you in the second verse, holding again with the melody before the chorus, also im thinking your third verse could be follow by your first just to get us back inside the church, then the chorus is all yours, if i wasted my time, I enjoy it, thank you
Yesterday When You Still Loved Me.
If I hide inside a church, will it wash away my sin.
Can God show me a way that I can feel alright again.
Sprinkle me with holy water. Cleanse My soul I pray.
But never again will I feel as clean as I felt yesterday.
Take me to the ocean blue to wash away my pain.
Find a storm where I can stand beneath the cleansing rain.
Point me toward a waterfall. I’ll stand beneath the spray.
But never again will I feel as clean as I felt yesterday.
Yesterday when you still loved me, not so long before.
I wish somehow I could return to yesterday once more.
Looking for my will to live since you walked out that door.
Why can’t we go back and be the way we were before?
I never felt such guilt before. I never dreamed I could.
Cause once my life was like a script straight out of hollywood.
But then I ruined everything, and guilt’s the price I’ll pay.
And never again will I feel as clean as I felt yesterday.
If I hide inside a church, will it wash away my sin.
Can God show me a way that I can feel alright again.
Sprinkle me with holy water. Cleanse My soul I pray.
But never again will I feel as clean as I felt yesterday.
Yesterday when you still loved me, not so long before.
I wish somehow I could return to yesterday once more.
Looking for my will to live since you walked out that door.
I just want to go back and be the way we were before.
As I felt yesterday.