indie/alternative (pop) song finished lyrics

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hazzaj500

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« on: July 03, 2017, 03:59:17 PM »
Lonely Company

I stay awake in the city that never wakes up
Playing my favourite tunes on a hookup
I’m living my life alone

I stay in when society shifts out
Drinking my favourite drinks until I blackout
I’m living my life unknown

I play rock when they play pop
I start when they say stop
As I’m a polar opposite
I tell the truth when others lie
As I’m finding hard to justify
 the world

I’m living my life alone
Just like everybody else
Except I have the headphones

I’m blocking out the sky
But I don’t know why
As


I play rock when they play pop
I start when they say stop
As I’m a polar opposite
I tell the truth when others lie
As I’m finding hard to justify
 the world

(riff/guitar solo or melody)

Soloooooooo
Aloneeeee
But I know others are too
So it’s alright









Let me know if there is anything bad in it as i want to improve if necessary, inspiration is from not going out with friends and family and isolating myself from the world when im hooked or into something, like playing guitar or youtube haha

Oldbutyet

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« Reply #1 on: July 03, 2017, 06:02:32 PM »
Hey Hazza welcome aboard.

I like what im reading, your first line took me right in and theres a touch of the darkside which i think makes it all the more interesting, for me your title is wrong "Lonely Company" doesn't really say much, i would go with "Finding Hard To Justify The World"  that talks to me because i understand exactly what you mean, believe me you're not alone.

You play guitar you should record this and post, really good lyrics  8)

hazzaj500

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« Reply #2 on: July 03, 2017, 09:47:21 PM »
song titles haven't really been a good part of my songs so far anyway, thanks for the suggestion, ill change the title, my youtube is
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diademgrove

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« Reply #3 on: July 04, 2017, 04:39:17 PM »
Hi hazza,

your words work for me. Reminds me of listening to records laying on my bed many years ago. Except I went our with my friends to get drunk.

My only suggestion would be to change "the city" in the first line to "a city". It just sounds lonelier to me.

Had a listen to D'You Now What I Mean?, impressed.

Keith

hazzaj500

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« Reply #4 on: July 06, 2017, 12:37:54 AM »
Thanks Keith, i like the idea, ill make the adjustment :)