Hey guys!
I'm back with a new song! I've also upgraded my guitar and hopefully my guitar skills as well
. I think it sounds way better than my last song (the guitar playing), even though there are some tiny mistakes here and there.
I'm really curious what you think of the lyrics and melody and of the guitar part, as in: does the style of the playing match the song and is it enough, too little or too much?
Please let me know your opinions!
UPDATED VERSION:
https://soundcloud.com/user-388540497/criminal-of-loveSoundcloud link (old version):
https://soundcloud.com/user-388540497/love-criminalLyrics:
CRIMINAL OF LOVE
Sticks and stones you threw
But my bones were already broken
No soul left to solve this fight
Walking to the door
But it's shut in this lover’s prison
Stuck here while the love runs out
I’m locked away
In this heart-shaped prison
I can’t escape till you say you let me go
This crime of love
You have found me guilty
I sit my sentence of 3 words
This love hurts
It’s like the box of hope
Has been shut so I stopped believing
Beat by beat I take the pain
Dream of better days
Honest love and some happy feelings
But waking up my smile is gone
I’m locked away
In this heart-shaped prison
I can’t escape till you say you let me go
This crime of love
You have found me guilty
I sit my sentence of 3 words
This love hurts
Can I ever rehabilitate
Can I unlock your stone cold embrace
I’ll beat your prison heart and move on
I’m locked away
In this heart-shaped prison
I can’t escape till you say you let me go
This crime of love
You have found me guilty
I sit my sentence of 3 words
This love hurts
I’m locked away
Like a criminal of love
Of love