[Antonydizzz]

Hello guys.
My name is Chris and I'm a novice at writing song in English. English is not my native language, I've been learning it for last 5 years by myself and think that gained enough knowledge to write simple songs ).
I ask you for help in grammar and ....logic ?) I mean in different languages some words could have different meaning and so the logic might be broken respectively even if it seems well for me ).

This is my first song it's called "Believers" and it is just about people and relationship between them into society (like a thousand other songs lol). Wait for you comments and thank you in advance!

[Verse 1]

Days go in the void
People go through
a something they don't want to learn
and don't want to do

They meet someone here
As if it is need
because an every man
wants to believe

[Chorus]

That it was all for something
That it'll end up with the light
But they still want to repeat
and can't accept that life isn't  kind


[Verse 2]

One's looking for beacon
Another makes it insane
An adversarial position
This is a root of a flame

A target for the killers
It's someone's innocence
Those dreamers and speakers
who believe it makes a sense

[Chorus 2]

That it was all for something
That it'll end up with the light
But they still want to repeat
and can't accept that life isn't  kind

Until the heads are beaten
and all the minds
No one will be defeated
Just broken lives behind... behind... behind..

[bridge]

A billion voices
that were never heard
The earth' curses
The earth' blood

They meet someone here
As if it is need
because an every man
wants to believe

[Chorus 2]

This all will be for something
and it'll end up with the light
It will be thousand times repeated
It doesn't matter what kind is life

And the heads won't be beaten
all the minds will shine
No one will be defeated
No borders on the line

[Gill]

Hi, I'll try ma best *=corrections 

[Verse 1]

Days go in the void
People go through
* something they don't want to learn
or *don't want to do

They meet someone here
As if it's a* need
because all of man*
wants to believe

[Chorus]

That it was all for something
That it'll end up with the light
But they still want to repeat
and can't accept that life isn't kind


[Verse 2]

One's looking for a *beacon
Another makes it insane
An adversarial position
This is the *root of a flame

A target for the killers
It's someone's innocence
Those dreamers and speakers
who believe it makes* sense

[Chorus 2]

That it was all for something
That it'll end up with the light
But they still want to repeat
and can't accept that life isn't kind

Until the heads are beaten
and all the minds
No one will be defeated
Just broken lives behind... behind... behind..

[bridge]

A billion voices
that were never heard
The earth's* curses
The earth's* blood

They meet someone here
As if it is needed*
because all of man*
wants to believe

[Chorus 2]

This will all* be for something
and it'll end up with the light
It will be a* thousand times repeated
It doesn't matter how* kind, is life

And the heads won't be beaten
all the minds will shine
No one will be defeated
No borders on the line