The Hand of Fate

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« Reply #30 on: June 03, 2017, 10:34:48 PM »
Kinda of like this,  it reminds me of earlier lyrics of Bob Dylan

Thankyou Rosie!
You are very astute.

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« Reply #31 on: June 03, 2017, 10:50:39 PM »
Kinda of like this,  it reminds me of earlier lyrics of Bob Dylan

Thankyou Rosie!
You are very astute.

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My icon Dylan was the inspiration behind my words but the song NOSTRADAMUS by Al Stewart was the driving force :-)
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« Reply #32 on: June 04, 2017, 12:36:54 AM »
To each and every one of You.
I would just like to say a big Thankyou for accepting me to your Forum and allowing me to express myself and my love of word.
The truth is...
My Dad past away this morn.
Maybe by the Hand of Fate.

RIP Michael

Sorry for the lost of your Dad Jack, continue writing and posting.

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« Reply #33 on: June 04, 2017, 03:16:13 PM »
To each and every one of You.
I would just like to say a big Thankyou for accepting me to your Forum and allowing me to express myself and my love of word.
The truth is...
My Dad past away this morn.
Maybe by the Hand of Fate.

RIP Michael

Sorry for the lost of your Dad Jack, continue writing and posting.

Cheers matey.
And many thanks for your kind words and inspiration.
I do plan to carry on writing.
Whether it be a Song or a Poem or a Book?

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« Reply #34 on: June 07, 2017, 12:05:34 AM »
God handed me a PAINTBRUSH
Telling me to COLOUR earth
So I nailed a cross to Jesus
Then asked Him what it's worth?

I have rode with all the Rulers
And SKETCHED their Kingdoms fall
Jestered Kings and Queens
Made STATUES of 'em all!!!

My BRUSHROKES tell Your story
All its Times n all its Dates
But I PAINT things my own way
I am the Hand of Fate

As I DREW for Nostradamus
King Henry died by eye
So we DOODLED in a book
POTRAYING Doom is on the nigh.

Knights Templars' then Crusade
And DRAW the Masons in
So I PAINTED them a Mystery
QUILLING secret codes and sin.

My BRUSHSTROKES tell Your story
All its Times n all its Dates
But I PAINT things my own way
I am the Hand of Fate

As I wined and dined Rasputin
He was killed by a guest's gun
DEPICTED as the Mad Monk
His 'Habits' became his undone

I have sailed with Chris Columbus
And discovered the New Lands
I PENNED all maps and charts
You now have in your hands.

Your memories n histories
Will one day fade away
Your colours of life
In BLACK and WHITE
Will turn a shade of GREY.


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I kind of like my last verse.
It  'Paints' what this song and Life itself is all about.

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« Reply #35 on: June 13, 2017, 08:07:38 PM »
God handed me a PAINTBRUSH
Telling me to COLOUR earth
So I nailed a cross to Jesus
Then asked Him what it's worth?

I have rode with all the Rulers
And SKETCHED their Kingdoms fall
Jestered Kings and Queens
Made STATUES of 'em all!!!

My BRUSHROKES tell Your story
All its Times n all its Dates
But I PAINT things my own way
I am the Hand of Fate

As I DREW for Nostradamus
King Henry died by eye
So we DOODLED in a book
POTRAYING Doom is on the nigh.

Knights Templars' then Crusade
And DRAW the Masons in
So I PAINTED them a Mystery
QUILLING secret codes and sin.

My BRUSHSTROKES tell Your story
All its Times n all its Dates
But I PAINT things my own way
I am the Hand of Fate

As I wined and dined Rasputin
He was killed by a guest's gun
DEPICTED as the Mad Monk
His 'Habits' became his undone

I have sailed with Chris Columbus
And discovered the New Lands
I PENNED all maps and charts
You now have in your hands.

Your memories n histories
Will one day fade away
Your colours of life
In BLACK and WHITE
Will turn a shade of GREY.


Jackdaw1888 :-)


Got two more verses on the go,
Before this song's complete,
I will add them soonest
And then be Obsolete!!!

Regards
Jackdaw1888 :-)
The Road to Happiness leads nowhere.
Happiness is the Road itself.

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« Reply #36 on: July 13, 2017, 09:35:17 PM »
God handed me a PAINTBRUSH
Telling me to COLOUR earth
So I nailed a cross to Jesus
Then asked Him what it's worth?

I have rode with all the Rulers
And SKETCHED their Kingdoms fall
Jestered Kings and Queens
Made STATUES of 'em all!!!

My BRUSHROKES tell Your story
All its Times n all its Dates
But I PAINT things my own way
I am the Hand of Fate

As I DREW for Nostradamus
King Henry died by eye
So we DOODLED in a book
POTRAYING Doom is on the nigh.

Knights Templars' then Crusade
And DRAW the Masons in
So I PAINTED them a Mystery
QUILLING secret codes and sin.

My BRUSHSTROKES tell Your story
All its Times n all its Dates
But I PAINT things my own way
I am the Hand of Fate

As I wined and dined Rasputin
He was killed by a guest's gun
DEPICTED as the Mad Monk
His 'Habits' became his undone

I have sailed with Chris Columbus
And discovered the New Lands
I PENNED all maps and charts
You now have in your hands.

Your memories n histories
Will one day fade away
Your colours of life
In BLACK and WHITE
Will turn a shade of GREY.


Jackdaw1888 :-)


Got two more verses on the go,
Before this song's complete,
I will add them soonest
And then be Obsolete!!!

Regards
Jackdaw1888 :-)

Any budding Bob Dylan out there want to know the last 2 verses to this Song?
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« Reply #37 on: August 17, 2017, 08:42:23 PM »
Still working upon this songs last 2 verses.
Sorry!!!

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« Reply #38 on: August 18, 2017, 11:28:55 AM »
I like this.
it's quite rough and makes me want to correct it.
There are some good ideas here, and in a way it is, of course, fine the way it is.

It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #39 on: August 18, 2017, 01:01:50 PM »
I like this.
it's quite rough and makes me want to correct it.
There are some good ideas here, and in a way it is, of course, fine the way it is.



Thankyou!!!
I like it too :-)
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« Reply #40 on: August 19, 2017, 08:57:51 PM »
Despite where I go with JAYLEEN, this song THE HAND OF FATE will always be my fave!!!
Bob Dylan remains my icon.

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« Reply #41 on: August 24, 2017, 06:54:56 PM »
Despite where I go with JAYLEEN, this song THE HAND OF FATE will always be my fave!!!
Bob Dylan remains my icon.

Jackdaw1888 :-)

Well over 1500 views and positive feedback on this Forum re my lyrics The Hand of Fate and yet still no budding aspiring musically talented person has managed to put my words to a demo/song/disc???

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« Last Edit: August 24, 2017, 06:56:27 PM by Jackdaw »
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« Reply #42 on: August 26, 2017, 10:09:33 PM »
Just saying Hi and have a Fab bank hols.
But the truth is I just wanted to see 3 of my songs come lyrics at the top of this Forum.

Many thanks SONGWRITERS for allowing me to write and to post.
THANKYOU!!!

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« Reply #43 on: September 24, 2017, 09:52:01 PM »
The hand of fate has just dealt me a cruel blow.
My sister lost her fight re cancer and her brain tumour.

May the gods smile down upon her.
May the angels give her wings.

Rest in peace Patricia Anne xxx

Carl Anthony
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« Reply #44 on: October 02, 2017, 12:30:52 AM »
I like this.
it's quite rough and makes me want to correct it.
There are some good ideas here, and in a way it is, of course, fine the way it is.



Please offer this Forum your valid thoughts and as to how you can "Correct" my lyrics???

Thankyou

Jackdaw1888
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Happiness is the Road itself.