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« on: May 10, 2017, 02:14:00 AM »
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This uh, belongs in another thread.
Just picture this like a dirty old warehouse in the rust belt. Takin' up space on the internet.








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« Reply #1 on: May 13, 2017, 09:48:08 AM »
Hi!

Maybe this post should be in the lyrics section.
In 'Be you can say anything you want to me'
is 'Be' a name?

You seem to be rhyming here and there. Is it
intentional?

Keep working.

Martin

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« Reply #2 on: May 13, 2017, 01:05:05 PM »
Hi!

Maybe this post should be in the lyrics section.
In 'Be you can say anything you want to me'
is 'Be' a name?

You seem to be rhyming here and there. Is it
intentional?

Keep working.

Martin

That is a typo, it's
'but you can say anything you want to me'
It's about people who have weird boundaries and then turn around and walk all over you.
Let me just go ahead and fix that.

Works in progress made more sense to me at the time, but if I actually bothered to read the rules I would probably change my tune. Pun UNintended.

And the rhyming is intentional

:)
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