Hi, everyone, this is my first time on the forum and I'm looking for some kinda feedback on this new song I wrote, it's sort of a slow acoustic song called Laid-back Silhouette
Verse 1:
Do you wish there was a place where you can filter your thoughts?
For me, it's a back room, of any place that's quiet and calm
Voices surround me, giving anxiety, overwhelming to a point
Parties and social gatherings, are, oh, so overrated, I need to blow off steam
Chorus:
I'm just a laid-back silhouette, in the background of a coffee shop, avoiding
the crowd, hiding away with the thoughts I've got
Verse #2:
I'm fine being a common sunflower in a plethora of beguiling roses
But rather than listening to obnoxious
Babel, I'd rather listen to the echoes of tranquility
Drowning in delicate daffodils, getting caught up staring at the stars
Alas, this only exists within my dreams
Chorus #2:
I'm just a laid-back silhouette, behind a soundless wall, thinking of all the things that render in my mind
Bridge:
Used to play solitaire in a full classroom
Used to get worked up being the center of attention
Used to get lost in fantasy to escape this reality
Used to spend hours musing under a nearby bridge
Contemplating peace