[pompeyjazz]

Nice cachy modern pop tune. Liked it

[TheButcher]

Hello;

very poppy and modern production.

I like how you use the vocal samples to transport the song and move it forward.

groove develops well.

a very well crafted song from beginning to end.

chorus felt a little cheesy - but you hit the spot with this song, i think.

peace

B

[Mutrins]

Nice cachy modern pop tune. Liked it

Thanks so much!

[Mutrins]

Hello;

very poppy and modern production.

I like how you use the vocal samples to transport the song and move it forward.

groove develops well.

a very well crafted song from beginning to end.

chorus felt a little cheesy - but you hit the spot with this song, i think.

peace

B

Thanks for your feedback! I appreciate it!

[Rick trodat]

Very nice popsong. I love the professional double tracking vocals.

[LostBoy]

Hello mate,
Very pro sounding track! U are obviously a very talented dude! Love the Enrique "ping pong" going on and the lyrics are interesting. Great voice! I do have to be honest and say that for me the verses were way too long, my attention was drifting. I like the chorus, I just want to get there quicker. I reckon u could cut the time down to an easy 3.30 even less and still have a great pop song.

Just my two cents mate
I hope it helps
Leo

[PaulyX]

Nice stuff!  I'm a fan of analogue synths and loved the slowly building layers you put under the verses.  It made me think a little of Goldfrapp.  You've got a very pro sounding voice too.  Chorus was powerful - clever for the drums to drop out completely when it comes in first time around. The chorus is hooky so if you want to make it more commercial I'd cut down second verse and get to second appearance of the chorus more quickly - then repeat chorus more in the second half.  I wish you well with them labels - this is much better than a lot of stuff that gets signed.  I liked the unusual lyrics too - don't go anodyne.

[Mutrins]

Very nice popsong. I love the professional double tracking vocals.

Thank you!

[Mutrins]

Hello mate,
Very pro sounding track! U are obviously a very talented dude! Love the Enrique "ping pong" going on and the lyrics are interesting. Great voice! I do have to be honest and say that for me the verses were way too long, my attention was drifting. I like the chorus, I just want to get there quicker. I reckon u could cut the time down to an easy 3.30 even less and still have a great pop song.

Just my two cents mate
I hope it helps
Leo

Thank you so much, Leo!

I've also thought about shortening the verses and getting to the chorus quicker. I have a problem with drawn out verses I think lol. Thank you for your feedback!!

Micky

[Mutrins]

Nice stuff!  I'm a fan of analogue synths and loved the slowly building layers you put under the verses.  It made me think a little of Goldfrapp.  You've got a very pro sounding voice too.  Chorus was powerful - clever for the drums to drop out completely when it comes in first time around. The chorus is hooky so if you want to make it more commercial I'd cut down second verse and get to second appearance of the chorus more quickly - then repeat chorus more in the second half.  I wish you well with them labels - this is much better than a lot of stuff that gets signed.  I liked the unusual lyrics too - don't go anodyne.

Thank you!!

So glad to hear about the lyrics.....always a gamble when you go "weird" or different, but to me it's fun. I'm thinking of cutting the second verse down for sure.

Thank you so much for your thorough feedback!

Micky

[Movin Flavour]

Well crafted song

Would easily get into the current charts....

...when are you getting a recording contract?

Sandeep

[Neil C]

Hi pro sounding modern pop, verses are catchy. My main though is it takes too long to get to the chorus for the modern attention span.
Good luck with
 
Neil

[Mutrins]

Well crafted song

Would easily get into the current charts....

...when are you getting a recording contract?

Sandeep

Thank you! Recording contract? No idea. I may not have enough followers for that

[Mutrins]

Hi pro sounding modern pop, verses are catchy. My main though is it takes too long to get to the chorus for the modern attention span.
Good luck with
 
Neil

Thank you!!

Yes I've been thinking about cutting it down in general. Gotta get to that.

Thanks again

[Darren1664]

Hey mate

Agree with everyone else here. Very modern sounding and excellent production. You have a very strong vocal and good lyrics. I really enjoyed this track...I also enjoyed the last track of yours I heard...an album coming on I think....

Good work mate!!

Darren