[Morefrog Jones]

Thought i'd have a go at making a short instrumental ideal to suit an ad campaign - i believe it can be lucrative if you can get your foot in the door - not sure if I've hit the right spot with this one or should i just turn it into a song with lyrics. What do you think?

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[Wicked Deeds]

Excellent! I think it's really fit for purpose and compliments this add perfectly.

Paul

[Gill]

If I came across the advert with this music I wouldn't think there is anything odd, which is essentially the first thing you don't want someone thinking. I think it's a perfect match. Good job!

[Kristupas]

Definitely agree, that it doesn't strike you as it would be odd for the commercial.

Just one thing that, to my ears, could make it more listenable, is that synth sound is too active(16th notes), that wizzly sound is to penetrating, I want it to be more soothing for the ear.

But in general it sound very nice, I like the main theme melody, that you start and end with.