I've been writing lyrics for a little while, but never has the courage to post this them.
This song I realised sounded a lot like The View from the Afternoon by the Arctic Monkeys, so listen to that for an idea. Not only that, but people tell me my voice sounds like Alex Turner's; some of the rhymes in this song may not sound like they work but do when sung in my accent.
It's still quite rough, so I'd like some advice about general improvements. I've already got the music in mind.
You always win when you bribe the doctor,
You only lost when you tried 'n' unlocked her heart.
No thanks to all past experiences
You can't stand watching movie kisses.
You never seem sure of where you can start.
Bleeding out the nights, you put on
A mask that allowed them to condone
All your selfish acts you did
That paved your road to the Leonids
And now sitting on the coach to heaven
You just complain the seats aren't leather.
You just complain 'bout the awful weather.
You just complain the seats aren't leather.
"You always, always win
There's nothing, nope, nothin'
I can even hope to try and do
To start making it up to you."
You never seem to lose
Even under heavy booze
You say to her "Don't you dare
Even think of going there."
(But where's there?)
Every little thing you held,
Every tiny thing she smelled
Screams of everything you did.
Everything you did commits
Another day to the dumping ground is
Where every speck of love's compounded.
Where every speck of love's compounded.
Where every speck of loves' compound is.
Bleeding out the nights, alone
You wear a mask that said "Condone
All my selfish acts I do
That pave our roads to me and you,"
And now sitting on the coach to hell
You just complain you don't feel well.
You just complain your legs are swelled.
You just complain you don't feel well.
Sunny, summer sun ripe wine:
The only thing that can define
What you feel, though you can't afford it.
Sunny summer sun ripe wine:
The single thing that you can find.
The problem is you think it tastes morbid.
Breezy, sweaty Mexican Coke;
Your sleazy medicine provokes
Your inner, darker, kind of thoughts.
Stop a moment, have a pause.
A minute of silence for irony;
Forgot how we got here, the tyranny.
Beat our heads against a wall
Afterwards we feel three metres tall
But you, it leaves your head swimming
Blood gushes in there, have some aspirin.
I know it won't stop the bleeding
But it'll make it worse.
Some time you need to lose
You need to leave here in a hearse
Or a bodybag.
"You always, always win
There's nothing, nope, nothin'
I can even hope to try and do
To start making it up to you."