Hi all,
This is my first upload, a song about indigenous people and animals being washed away from their home land by big corporations that keep destroying our nature. I need to retake the vocal in a proper studio, put in back vocal and harmonies plus bass in the music. Need your feedback particularly on my lyric.
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Lyric:
This Song For You
It takes some time for me to realize
Everything that I see
When there’s no left our own right to stand on the ground
Being washed away from where we belong
Is that easy for you to break and burn
Everything that you see
For the reason in fulfilling your own desire
Never thought we deserve the air that we share
Can you see it how pretty those colors with breeze
Silent voices from the young still learn how to sing
Can you feel how refreshing the fragrance with mist
That is where we share laughter with friends everyday
It takes a lifetime to get there and it’s gone in a night
Can you hear me, this is sad song, I sing it for you
So that was our home dear
Where our mom and dad met
Plan the future for us
It’s just a memory now
If you ever believe there is faith
In everything that we do
We are the one open the path leading to our lives
For god or for bad it is in our hands