There's one line that stood out for me as possibly needing a little tweaking, although I'm no Wordsworth.
'What do you see man, when the mirror gets inside your head'
I think I get what you're saying here but there seems to be some kind of mixing of two ideas I think.
Almost like you haven't finished exploring the idea of what he sees in the mirror before its already got into his head.
Yodasdad
Hey there Yodasdad...........thanks for listening and commenting.
"What do you see, man, when the mirror gets inside your head?"Here, the mirror is asked to reflect something that isn't really there, by my subject.
The line, as questioned, is a challenge to him, by me, to be honest and look upon himself and to see things as they really are, without the sociopathic perspective that allows himself to believe the false reflective mirror of the ego.
Snow White reflects this example of
"the mirror getting into ones head" in a most genius way
Thanks again!
And thanks to all who have listened!
-Tom