[hardtwistmusic]

I couldn't find a cadence or "rhythm" to this, but I can tell there is one in there. 

I'll check back occasionally and see if I can find it.  It should not be alarming that I can't find the cadence/rhythm.  Usually, the ones I have to struggle to find end up (either through my imagination, or the artist's vision) being more dramatic than the easy ones.   

Tremendous power in your words. 

[JonDavies]

Thanks Hardtwistmusic for the kind words - I had half a melody in my head when writing and it seems to fit the music pretty well

[Jazzone]

I like this a lot.   


Reflective lyrics are good.  Lots of content. 

Enjoyed reading it.