[GuitarArt1980]

Here's one I finished recently. Please take a listen and let me know what you think. Thanks.

http://kiroskiro.bandcamp.com/track/i-am-on-fire

I Am On Fire
This head on my shoulder
My savior
I am on fire

Take a look around
I'm afraid of
Letting you see out at my..

And I don't walk in shadows
And I don't feel the shallow hearts

Only to get by
Enough to feel alright at dawn
Don't think the funnier side will save you now
On a fragile satellite
Always taking sides
You're not too young to die
So say goodnight

Oh I know it's all a joke
But I can feel your laughter in my bones

[Morefrog Jones]

Really enjoyed the song and the whole vibe.
Right up my Indie Street

[Cazrolina]

Particularly liked the percussion flourishes, so to speak, dreamy guitar/synth and instrumental section. Took me on a really cool journey. Liked this a lot. You have a great style. (Post the lyrics!)
Caz

[Martinswede]

Hi!

Your song got better as I listened to it.
I like the ending minute a lot.

Post lyrics

Cheers,
- Martin

[Mike67]

I loved all 3:47 of it. Dreamy, indie, creative, beautifully executed. I'm in awe.

Mike

[Mutrins]

Here's one I finished recently. Please take a listen and let me know what you think. Thanks.

http://kiroskiro.bandcamp.com/track/i-am-on-fire

Love the vibe on this. Very dreamy. Great production and vocals. Love that you've got some synth in there as well. I appreciate that the melodies take very unexpected turns.

Very cool!!

[CaliaMoko]

I'll add my voice to the "post the lyrics" cheering section. You can go right into your original post and add the lyrics there. I think that is the best way to do it. Everyone will expect to see them there.

[Jamie]

Hi, pretty good production and enjoyed the instrumentation especially in the second half. Good effort!
Cheers
Jamie

[GuitarArt1980]

Lyrics posted - thanks all so much for listening!

[JonDavies]

Oooh this is good - really good. Beautiful balance of sounds and really well produced.

Makes me wish I had better headphones

[CaliaMoko]

Wowee! Nice! Everything seems put together very deliberately and well. Everything just fits perfectly. I like to pick nits, but I can't find any.

[Skub]

Hey GuitarArt1980

Love the soundscape here,haven't a notion what the song is about,but the words fit well with the piece.

It grows on me after a few listens and everything is well put together.

Interesting song.

[Andyb]

Like this a lot
I thought the vocals towards the end of the song had better production, they blended better with the music and had a more ethereal sound. It sounded a little bit like the vocals at the start almost like you were trying to sing quietly and not really go for the bigger notes? I don't know if this was intentional or as a result of your recording set up. I'm nit picking really and refer to my opening sentence.