The new version is much improved to my ears LAQ,right up until the chorus 'Could I waste a moment of your time',then the vocals once again overwhelm the guitar and are quite fierce. The guitar and vocal tracks seem to be separate entities and not integrated,or working together. I'm not sure why this is,maybe a combination of EQ and reverb?
The update is edging closer to the intimacy the song requires,but it needs just that little bit more. Ask Boydie,he will be able to articulate and target what I'm dribbling on about.
I know the song is important to ya man,I can hear that and it deserves more work.