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The Edge Of The Night....

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« on: February 26, 2017, 12:17:48 PM »
Hi all this is my latest song
Its about going on a drive at night away from the Cities

                  ...The Edge Of The Night...

{Verse.1}.
I Hear, All The Noise,... From The Daylight!!...
The Hussle, Of People,... Of The Day!!...
Caught Up, By The Stress, By This Life's, Awful Mess!!...
Just Trying, To Survive,... Another Day!!...
Can't Wait, For Edge,... Of Tomorrow!!...
The End Of The Day,... To The Night!!...
When The, Stars Of The Sky, Keep, Shining Bright!!...
& The Road's, Are Quiet, Throughout, The Night!!...

{Chorus}.
Just Tear Along, An Old,... Open Highway!!...
Just Look, At The,... Shimmering Light's!!...
Just Drive, Like There's,... NO!!!,... Tomorrow!!...
Caught Up, By The Edge,... Of The Night!!...

{Verse.2}.
Drive Free, From Life's,... Crazy Place's!!...
Just Head, To The Dark,... Of The Night!!...
Ur Foot, On The Gas,... Let That World, Sail On Past!!...
As U Gaze, At The Road,... Of The Night!!...
Just Drive, Too Life's,... Empty Place's!!...
Just Stare, At The Star's,... In Sky!!...
Forget, All Ur Life's,... Pain & Sorrow!!...
As U Have, The Drive,... Of Ur Life!!...

{Chorus}.
Just Tear Along, An Old,... Open Highway!!...
Just Look, At The,... Shimmering Light's!!...
Just Drive, Like There's,... NO!!!,... Tomorrow!!...
Caught Up, By The Edge,... Of The Night!!...

{Bridge}.X4.
Just Tear Along, An Old,... Open Highway!!...
Empty Lane's, Too The Left,... & The Right!!...
Just Drive, Like There's,... NO!!!,... Tomorrow!!...
Caught Up, By The Edge,...  By The Edge,... Of The Night!!...

{Ending/Solo}.
The Night!!...
Of The Night!!...
The Night!!...
Just Tear Along, An Old,... Open Highway!!...
Just Look, At The,... Shimmering Light's!!...
Just Drive, Like There's,... NO!!!,... Tomorrow!!...
Caught Up, By The Edge,... Of The Night!!...
The Night!!...
The Night!!...
The Night!!...

{The End}.

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Melody 1st...
Lyrics Will Come After ;)

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« Reply #1 on: February 28, 2017, 03:37:02 PM »
I liked it, and thought it was quite atmospheric.  The sound quality is a bit ropey and it was difficult to make out what was going on instrumentally, but I liked the mood and it definitely has potential to grow.  It's unusual and therefore stands out. Keep at it and I'll look forward to hearing it again as you continue working on it.

Mike

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« Reply #2 on: March 03, 2017, 03:43:18 PM »
Thx bud, yup work in Progress...
Just 1st time Recording :)
Melody 1st...
Lyrics Will Come After ;)