constructive criticism wanted
I wrote this literally just now in about 10 minutes haha. It's still very rough but if there are any suggestions for lyrical changs then please comment and let me know
Thank you.
You’ve got to lay it down for me
Pretend like nothing’s wrong.
You speak your words in riddles
All I hear is tongues.
Lay yourself down dreaming
Castles in your mind.
The only place you can call home
You were robbed of. Left dirty and blind
use me, call me crazy
We never ran out of time
Tell me, where is this chemistry?
That you promised all our lives
Why are you so angry?
I let you be what you wanted to be.
But tell me, is there hope?
You’ve got to lay it down
You’ve got lay it down for me
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