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Little Bit Higher

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Morefrog Jones

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« on: February 25, 2017, 06:36:28 PM »
Hi This is a unfinished song that is lacking a second verse and an I think an alternative but similar 2nd chorus - song possibly a bit long and needs bigger finish at the end with some Improvisation I think.

Anyone wanting to have a go at improving/finishing the lyrics are welcome as an official collaboration

I'd like the song to be about a slippery politician but not that is so obvious that it could also be about a difficult woman in a relationship.

Link:
https://soundcloud.com/morefrog-jones/raise-the-bar-a-little-bit-higher-unfinished-demo
« Last Edit: March 21, 2017, 10:30:43 PM by Morefrog Jones »

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« Reply #1 on: February 26, 2017, 12:51:49 PM »
Hi

If you're still looking for help on this, let me know.
I listened to the demo and came up with a few ideas. So if you pm me the lyrics I can try working it out.

Roger