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Morefrog Jones
Platinum Album
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Little Bit Higher
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February 25, 2017, 06:36:28 PM »
Hi This is a unfinished song that is lacking a second verse and an I think an alternative but similar 2nd chorus - song possibly a bit long and needs bigger finish at the end with some Improvisation I think.
Anyone wanting to have a go at improving/finishing the lyrics are welcome as an official collaboration
I'd like the song to be about a slippery politician but not that is so obvious that it could also be about a difficult woman in a relationship.
Link:
https://soundcloud.com/morefrog-jones/raise-the-bar-a-little-bit-higher-unfinished-demo
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PENKSLYRICS
Open Mic
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February 26, 2017, 12:51:49 PM »
Hi
If you're still looking for help on this, let me know.
I listened to the demo and came up with a few ideas. So if you pm me the lyrics I can try working it out.
Roger
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