A few suggestions: Mostly due to what appear to be lines that seem to break cadence. If they help, use them. IF not discard. Good luck. Very good lyric in my opinion.
Long hair of bible black
damnation down her back
thrown against a shoulders curve
make the straightest of arrows swerve
but she’s not what she seems
itShe's just a fantasy
she’ll make a good man scream
wait and see
just like me
We’re on our knees
mercy, mercy mercy, mercy me.
her lips will pray for you
god only knows who's she praying to?
salvation must repent
partook of her sacrament
this girl has got it all
forget like drugs and alcohol
she's like a an emotional wrecking ball
Wait and see
We’re on our knees
hear our pleas
mercy, mercy, mercy, mercy me.
Mercy mercy mercy mercy me.
words cast as libelous stones ... @
unfaithful dead mans bones
vultures descend from high
dark angel makes mama cry
oh dark angel, hear my me cry
she’s not what she seems
its She's just a fantasy
She makes a good man scream
wait and see
just like me
hear our plea
mercy, mercy, mercy, mercy me.
mercy, mercy, mercy, mercy me.