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mickyplankton

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« on: February 21, 2017, 01:52:54 PM »
Hi all,

This song is a bit of a back to basics approach from me. Its a stripped down 2 minute garage rock song that is deliberately minimalist.

Lyrically, it is also intended to be open to interpretation.

It could be a song about the glorious fragility of humanity against the backdrop of an infinite and unknowable universe.... or.... it could be about nothing at all......

The lyrics are:

Guadaladaloops....on repeat.

https://soundcloud.com/mickyplankton/guadaladaloops

Thanks for listening and feeding back.

Micky.
« Last Edit: February 21, 2017, 10:46:40 PM by mickyplankton »

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« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2017, 08:08:29 PM »
Punk - catchy - slightly mad - works for me!  :)

CaliaMoko

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« Reply #2 on: February 21, 2017, 09:31:17 PM »
Really don't know what to make of it. I think I'm on "stun". Intriguing at the very least. Don't think I can do the feedback thing, though. Wouldn't know what to say....  ??? ;D

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« Reply #3 on: February 21, 2017, 10:40:08 PM »
I, er....I don...hmm

It rhymes!

For me the timing would need tightening up on the instrumental track but I guess punk isn't really about precision.

I'm not sure what else to say.

You sounded like you enjoyed yourself so keep at it.

Yodasdad.

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« Reply #4 on: February 21, 2017, 10:55:16 PM »
I love the twist at the end with the lyrics - didn't expect that

I have no idea how to review this song - punk is meant to be low fi so the production being rough around the edges isn't the end of the world but I think that's the only thing I could recommend

ScottLevi

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« Reply #5 on: February 22, 2017, 08:43:12 AM »
Hahahaha I love it, a big part of music for me is the emotional effect they have, and this put a massive smile on my face. The "1-2-3-4 -" then drop bits are my fave

Nothing wrong with this at all, and its punk enough not to give a shi* that's it gibberish.

All the best,
Scott
« Last Edit: February 22, 2017, 08:47:19 AM by ScottLevi »

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« Reply #6 on: February 22, 2017, 09:13:06 AM »
Always up for a song that has more chords than words ... could be a great show opener like the Hives' "Come On". I'd keep it to about one minute long for maximum effect though...

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« Reply #7 on: February 22, 2017, 07:42:11 PM »
Love it. Love it. Love it. I don't know what else to say really. It's punk rock.
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« Reply #8 on: February 23, 2017, 06:51:05 PM »
Hi
Neat
I wonder if you could post the lyrics?
 :)
Neil
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« Reply #9 on: February 23, 2017, 09:31:12 PM »
Great stuff Micky. Does what it says on the tin. Great fun and lots of attitude. Does it for me

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« Reply #10 on: February 24, 2017, 08:46:27 AM »
Jesus H Christ!

I went to sleep singing guadaladaloops and now I've woke up with it in my head too!

You've done something right but I swear to god if my next song has a line like 'eat a lot of soup' or something in it, I'm coming for you Micky!

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« Reply #11 on: February 24, 2017, 12:08:57 PM »
Yo Micky.

You're as mad as a bottle of chips.

But in a good way.  :D

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« Reply #12 on: February 24, 2017, 12:23:34 PM »
Listened to two posted songs in the last 5 mins, and I'm truly back in my youth.  This is absolutely pure, simple, unadulterated fun, and it could seriously go viral.  Needs some production, but the song's done.

Mike

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« Reply #13 on: February 24, 2017, 04:30:00 PM »
somehow refreshing for my ear
I've been busy trying to make sense of things lately
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It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #14 on: February 24, 2017, 06:42:29 PM »
Hi,

Melodically, musically and lyrically refreshing...beyond criticism (and reason!  :)) and an earworm to boot!

Loved it

Cheers Phil
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