Hi Y'all,
UPDATEFollowing some very useful comments I have changed a few things, here is the most recent version if you'd care to listen to this one, instead or as well as.https://soundcloud.com/my-idiom/i-should-have-loved-you-more-v2-m-blair-2017I've been awol for a few weeks with my wife playing silly beggars and needing to spend some time in the hospital, I mean, how does she expect me to write songs stuck by a hospital bed. Anyway I've dragged her out of there and managed to get this one finished.
https://soundcloud.com/my-idiom/i-should-have-loved-you-more-m-blair-2017It's one of those that sounds great to me all the way through, right up until the point when I finish it and then I decide that it's a pile of poo and I hate it!
I'd love some objective ears and to hear what you guys think.
Thanks
Yodasdad
I Should Have Loved You More © M Blair 2017
Verse
I never bought you flowers
I’d just pass them on my way
I had the money in my jeans
It’s little things like that
that I just didn’t do
Even though I knew how much they’d mean
Chorus
I should have loved you more
I should have tried to find a way
I should have shown you that I care
If I’d held you more
just a little more each day
Would you still have walked away
Verse 2
i passed by your house today
theres a new car in the yard
I guess we both know what it means
I’m glad your moving on I hope he treats you well
Hope he’s a better man than me
Mid 8
I had it in me
But I just couldn’t let it out
I felt it burning deep inside
Perhaps I’m broken
Can’t show emotion
But if that’s true why do I cry?
I’ve cried every day since you left me