moving this to finished, because it's probably as good as i can get without professional help.
http://thebonanzalunchbox.bandcamp.com/track/damned-or-damagedi wrote this during the heat of the 2016 US Presidential election cycle
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we say we want freedom as we put more shackles on
we say we want peace not war as we lay the army whore
the useful things that we don't need
like all these books we'll never read
we win the fight but still concede
we're so damned if we don't and damaged if we do
we say we want true love and then we lock our door
we say we gonna rise above as we're wallowing on the floor
everybody must hate fun
we're laying down when we could run
we're making love and buying guns
we're so damned if we don't and damaged if we do
i'm tired but i can't sleep
hungry can't eat
and i'm wired aren't we all wired to wail and weep?
we say we wanna feed the poor and then we kick em down
we say everyone's all the same except for black and brown
the simple things we complicate
like all gods children filled with hate
in his name we desecrate
w're so damned if we don't and damaged if we do