Hi all this is my first attempt at writing a song and just wondered what you all think...
Have not got a title yet so any ideas on this would be appreciated
I hate to see you cry
to see that tear stream from your eye
it hurts me
I love to see you smile
to hear you laugh i'll go the extra mile
you complete me
It hasnt always been this way
Im proud of you is what im trying to say
it isnt easy telling you how i feel
it shouldnt be hard or be a big deal
But it is.
When im sleeping i am dreaming
its always you that i am seeing
no one else will ever do
you know its true that i love you
i love to hold you close so close i feel your heart beat
so close i feel your breaths heat
its amazing
its the best thing
i hate that i dont tell you often enough
but i think its obvious that im in love
i love you
for what you've given me im forever in your debt
always by my side since the first day that we met
i thankyou
When im sleeping i am dreaming
its always you that i am seeing
no one else will ever do
you know its true that i love you
me and you forever thats all i ever need
if i ever lost you my heart could only bleed
i cant imagine life without you
you tell me you love me and i should never doubt you
loving you is easy i've never had to try
a natural feeling for you until the day i die
When im sleeping i am dreaming
its always you that i am seeing
no one else will ever do
you know its true that i love you
i love you
i love you
Any feedback welcome thanks
