Okay,
this is the final (for now) version [posted 8 Feb 2017]
https://soundcloud.com/skub1955/vickis-lemonade-v4============================================
Final (for now) version posted 8 Feb 2017
https://soundcloud.com/skub1955/vickis-lemonade-v3============================================
I have, more or less, completed this song, thus I've moved it to "Finished Songs". I tried a backing track generated by the SongSmith software, but it didn't sound right, so I just strummed my guitar for accompaniment.
If anyone can think of any two-syllable words with emphasis on the first syllable that would be an improvement over "wisdom", that would be awesome. Or maybe that whole line could be something different. I'm stuck on it, at the moment.
The chords turned out to be easier than I anticipated. I couldn't figure out anything but C major to start with, but I consulted a guitar-playing friend, who helped me get past that block. I changed the melody a little, as where I went with the chords didn't match.
I don't really want to repeat the second verse; I would rather have an instrumental break there, but that's not my thing, so I sang the verse over instead.
Once I'm sure I'm happy with this whole thing, it's going to go on the pile of songs I'll be having mastered when (if) I get the grant I applied for. I should know in about two to three weeks.
All feedback solicited and, as always, please be very frank. I'm not touchy and I love finding out where I'm weak so I know what to work on.
The song file is here:
https://soundcloud.com/caliamoko/makin-lemonade2/s-kPTKoEDIT: 7 Feb 2017--This is now a collaboration with Skub. Hear the update here:
https://soundcloud.com/caliamoko/makin-lemonade-2/s-nLslg. He did all the fancy music with background vocals, instruments and stuff.
EDIT: 8 Feb 2017--Final version (we think):
https://soundcloud.com/skub1955/vickis-lemonade-v3MAKIN' LEMONADE
V1
You keep a-comin', knockin' on my door
Always a-complainin' that you're so poor
But don't you whine to me, buddy
I'm busy makin' lemonade.
You're always grousin' how the world is unfair,
And never in your life did you have a prayer.
But don't you whine to me, buddy
I'm busy makin' lemonade.
CHORUS
Don't keep a-both'rin' me with all your fussin'
You're all wound up about a whole lot o' nothin'
If you have any wisdom you'll join my parade
Go pick up all your lemons and make yourself some lemonade.
V2
I got no time for feelin' blue
I've decided what I need's a diff'rent attitude
So you won't hear me whinin', buddy,
I'm too busy makin' lemonade.
Don't matter if there's rain fallin' on my tree.
That only means more lemons next year for me.
No, you won't hear me whinin', buddy,
I'm too busy makin' lemonade.
CHORUS
V2 (I would prefer an instrumental break here)
CHORUS
Copyright 2017 Vicki Morrison