Any suggestions on how to improve this song/whether you think its good or bad are welcome. My instincts tell me its too repetitive, but what do you think?
Red, deep red
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©G Em
Red, deep red is the colour....
G D G
The colour of my loves hair
G Em
I long for her so but her lover
G d g
Well her lover, he ain’t all there
G C
Yes he’s a hard man
G
That’s for certain
G D G
He’s a rich man too
Em
But he don’t love you
G
He don’t love you
D
And I do
C
I saw him raise his hand
Em
And heard it run aground
G D G
It chilled me to the bone
C Em
I’d almost forgot about you
G D G
And forsook your earthen throne
G Em
Red, deep red is the colour....
G D G
The colour of my loves hair
G Em
I long for her so but her lover
G D G
He wears a manic stare
G C
Yes he’s a bad man
G
That’s for certain
G D G
He’s even got his own crew
Em
But he don’t love you
G
No he don’t love you
D
Like I do
C
I heard him raise a noise
Em
You never had a choice
G D G
It made you feel alone
C Em
I swore id stay around you
G D G
Until you felt at home
G Em
Red deep red is the colour...
G D G
The colour of my loves hair
G Em
I long for her so but her lover
G D G
Her lover refuses to share
G C
Yes he’s the big man
G
That’s for certain
G D G
He’s even got a shank and a 2
Em
But he don’t love you
G
No he don’t love you
D
And I do
But it never seems to matter to you
G Em
Red, deep red, is the colour....
G D G
The colour of your hair
G Em
I long for you so but your lover
G D G
Won’t stand you standing there
G C
But I’m a hard man
G
That’s for certain
G D G
And we’ve only got each other to lose
Em
And I love you
G
You know I love you
D
And I do
G Em
Red, deep red, is the colour....
G D G
the colour of my loves hair
G Em
I long for her so and her lover
G D G
Her old lover continues to glare
Written by Lawrence. S ©
