[11]

Hi this is work in progress

Wrote it in 30 mins...

https://www.facebook.com/M.D.Music.Page/posts/1205563192814699

Lyrics                         ---FAMILY---

(V1).
People Of The World, Can't U See...
We Are All One, Big, Family...
Few Are Good, Most Are Bad...
That Makes God, Really, Sad...

(Ch).
Oh... Can't U See...
That... U & Me...
Are, Family...

(V2).
What's... Is Wrong, With U & Me...
We Are Doing Wrong, Can't U See...
Where's The Love, For Family...
There's Too Much Hate, Don't U Agree?...

(Ch).
Oh... Can't U See...
That... U & Me...
Are, Family...

(Mid8).X2.

(V3).
Gods Kingdom, Will Help Us Be...
A Big, United... Family...
If We Try Our Best, Then We Will See...
A Big, Loving, Family...

(Ch).
Oh... Can't U See...
That... U & Me...
Are, Family...

(E/s).
Are, Fa-mi-ly...

The End.

[pompeyjazz]

Some nice ideas going on here Mr 11. You have a good melody which is always important. As its a WIP I would say concentrate on getting rid of the background hiss and not so many fx on the vocals as it seems that you have a good voice. Good that you're finding the forum useful

[11]

Hi pompey

Yeah its a great wee forum...
As for the recording its only the 2nd time doing it on my iphone...
I will do a better & clearer version soon...
Not bad to 30 mins work

[pompeyjazz]

Yeah Big Man, Do it cos you've got potential

[11]

Thx buddy,

Am getting good reports on that wee song...
As for me singing nah hate my voice...
Will get the lassie that sang Sneakything
In the Lyrics section i posted that song there...
U can hear her voice there...
She loves this song family...
So i will get her to sing a few of them

[pompeyjazz]

Don't hate your voice man. Embrace it. It's you, unique, never been heard before.

[11]

Oh naw...i only sing to show what it will go like...
But when i finish my songs it will be with other singers
I hate my voice... i cant see that ever changing :/