[ScottLevi]

2 Lines Each
_{"Secluded and Reserved"}

Don't know if there's any motive for this on the forum, but I always find this stuff quite cool so why not?

Rules
2 Lines Each (per week)
Be as creative as you can!
Don't worry about what you put, it's just a bit of fun!

The End Result?
I'm thinking we could put the end result up in the Collaboration League so anyone can make use if they'd like a crack at making a song from it (and license to tweak)

Complete Song
(I've started us off with a 2-line introduction)

Intro
She was secluded and reserved,
Such a curious creature...
^ScottLevi
Verse 1
She was lonely undeserved
You just wanted to meet her
^pompeyjazz
Sitting at the bar alone
Fiddling with her mobile phone
^CaliaMoko
Chorus
Mobile communications feed my integrations
Upon the hub of lost perennial shores
^boolio
A Mona Lisa smile that was my interpretation
or maybe she's a rebel but has she got a cause.
^tomcrocus
Verse 2
She broke into a smile
As she made her connection
^GuyBarry
Sitting at the bar with style
She had grabbed his attention
^diademgrove
Bridge
My feeling grew
So I changed my direction
^Boydie
Mumbled of last suppers
and hoped for a resurrection
^delb0y
Verse 3
She threw glances like seductive spores.
Adulteration, excitation then bedroom doors.
^johnlondon
Strictly my preserve
Secluded and reserved for me
^{Neil C}
Outro
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^User
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^User


So, anyone up for it?

[pompeyjazz]

She was lonely undeserved
You just wanted to meet her

[CaliaMoko]

Sitting at the bar alone
Fiddling with her mobile phone

[Skub]

Aloof and reserved may be preferable.

Secluded makes her sound like a garden.

[ScottLevi]

Aloof and reserved may be preferable.

Secluded makes her sound like a garden.

Looks like you've pulled out an opportunity for some double-entendre!

Maybe back it up with some more garden themes?

Was really tempted to just add your post as the first two lines of the chorus, but sense prevailed I think?

[boolio]

first two lines of chorus...

Mobile communications feed my integrations
Upon  the hub of lost perennial shores

 

[Skub]

 

[pompeyjazz]

And beyond the leafy borders
She went without a pause

[pompeyjazz]

Ah sugar - I've broken the rules (NOT LYRICS)

Sorry 

[ScottLevi]

And beyond the leafy borders
She went without a pause

Ah sugar - I've broken the rules (NOT LYRICS)

Sorry 

Awwww is a good'n as well, but where's my integrity if I throw the rule book away so soon?  Am hoping to get a new person for each set of lines but added the 1-week clause in in case not enough people engage.

Shaping up nicely to be fair, very interesting...

[tomcrocus]

CHORUS,

A Mona Lisa smile that was my interpretation
or maybe she's a rebel but has she got a cause.

[ScottLevi]

No one else? xD

[GuyBarry]

[I'll have a go, but is this the only song in the history of songwriting with words in the intro?  I don't know if I'm supposed to be matching the two intro lines or the first two lines of verse 1.]

She broke into a smile
As she made her connection

[ScottLevi]

[I'll have a go, but is this the only song in the history of songwriting with words in the intro?  I don't know if I'm supposed to be matching the two intro lines or the first two lines of verse 1.]

Hey Guy,

Just trying to set the scene whilst leaving the main content for the game, though I'm sure with my history it's no surprise I haven't followed conventions.

You're right on jumping in where it gets a bit more difficult. In reality it's just a bit of fun but if trying to keep true; the scene has been set and the verses now need to keep the previous in mind.

Hope this carries on, I think all the entries so far have been quite interesting.

Cheers,
Scott.

[diademgrove]

Sitting at the bar with style
She had grabbed his attention